Wip Status 2: Seasons.

Heyyy!
I know I know; Two posts in one day, but I reeally want to share this with you as it's so Amazingly hilarious that I couldn't not share it with you.

Yay it.. still.. Fits.. Huh.
I'll do a new pic later.

Man, it is SO much fun introducing a character who is a baddie but no one really thinks much of him. XD.

Anyway, Here are some snippits:

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 “Looks like it's Autumn's first battle with–” The commentator drew the word 'with' out as long as he could “– Silver!!” The crowd cheered, and I somehow managed to hear a 'Good Luck!' from Summer. I smiled.
“Listen Girlie; I don't have much time for you. I got some revenge I wanna dish out.”
I walked up to him.
“Good luck.” I said, smiling.
“Keep it; you'll need it.” he said, an evil look on his face.
“May the best warrior win.” I backed up and waited for him. I knew something that he (probably?) didn't; the first person to hit is generally the first one out. He charged and I just stood there. He landed an uppercut so hard it threw me into the air, jaw ringing. As I fell back down, he landed a kick in my chest that knocked me into the wall. Not the hedge wall, the actual wall of the stadium.
“Give up now and I'll let you join my team, girlie.” he called. I climbed off of the wall and walked over to him.
“Man, you're a sucker for punishment, aren't you?” He landed three more blows, knocking me back a little. He threw punch after punch after punch, but this time I dodged. All of them.
“Have I won yet?” I called up to the commentator, but he was busy. That seemed, for some reason, to make Silver more angry.
“Looks like Silver's using his spellkeep! He'll need it in order to win this incredibly weighed fight!”
That must've been what threw him off.
“What the hell?!” He yelled up at the commentator. That's when I punched him. He flew backwards into the hedge. “You little–” The crowd cheering tried to knock out the incredibly rude word, but I heard it. My eyes started to flicker black, same as my vision.
“Look's like Autumn's using her spellkeep! Silver's done for!” the commentator yelled gleefully.
“What the crap?!” Silver yelled.
Everything went blackish purple.
Until, that is, I heard someone yell something.

“Please! No!”
My eyes opened back up and my vision cleared. I was standing over a bruised, battered and bleeding Silver with my sword in hand, as if about to end it. Permanently. I dropped my sword and my hands flew to my mouth, eyes widening.
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 No.. Please, no!” August yelled. A boy.. The person Professor Jones had called “Mr. Black” was standing over him, smirking.
“This? This is my revenge. According to my spellkeep –” he gestured towards his neck “– I'll always get the revenge I want as long as the person I'm fighting is more powerful than me... This has been fun, August, but I'm afraid it's over for you. Forever.” He raised his sword high just as my eyes blacked out.
Keep.
Calm.
Keep.
Calm.
“Snap out of it! Autumn! Autumn!”
“Autumn what the –” I decided to block out this word. “– was that?!”
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I heard footsteps and my hand went cautiously to my sword. They sounded like someone had made them angry, and was now storming off in frustration. They were about to round the corner when I heard more footsteps and a voice.
“Tracy, Coal says to come back.” Voice 1 said.
“Why should I, Diamond?! He insulted me!” The second voice, apparently named Tracy, replied.
“He only said you should be careful not to kill them.” Diamond replied.
“I was!”
“They're half dead, the nurses said so.”
“Well, that's not entirely my fault, is it?!”
“You were the one who kept beating them after–”
“You girls coming?” A boy's voice yelled. I assumed he was Coal.
“Yep!” Both girls yelled in unison and they ran off.
After we were sure they were gone, Silver muttered “Some people are normal, some are weird, some are insane.”
“Which are those girls?” I asked him, smiling.
He grinned and replied “Neither; they belong in the fourth category; Psychotic.” I laughed, but it suddenly died away when I heard a scream.
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I know, some of them are long, but most of them are hilarious. Let me know which one is your favourite! (Personally, I like the last one)

That's all for now, See you! :D
-Ral
Tell me about your WIP in the comments below! I always read them <3

Comments

  1. WOW, I LOVED THOSE SNIPPETS!!! Great job. :-) I am interested in reading more about Autumn. ;-)
    My WIP is going well. *nods* I just released some game changer information about one of my characters. :-D
    Oh, I like your new blog format. XD

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    1. Thanks! I thought it'd be nice to change, as it was getting a little boring & Catherine had the same style, so... :D

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  2. Whoa I loved these snippets! They're good! I loved the end of the first one, so intriguing! :)

    Indigo

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  3. AAAAAH SUCH NICE SNIPPETS. *fistbumps* You're really improving, Ral. :D

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    1. *Gasps and Tackle hugs Jane* Thankie you!!! :D
      But seriously, this comment made my day! :D:D *hugs again*

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